Tonight, I am allowing myself to break
I have been brave for quite a while
I’m tired from stopping my world to shake
And I lost every reason to smile
I was once tough, now I am scared
You made me scared to fall inlove again
Broken to pieces and no one cared
Seemed I was cursed back then
I lost you and you took away all of me
You let our love go down the drain
I dare you to switch places with me
Maybe then you’ll understand the pain
28 replies on “Switch places”
Wow.. nice one !!
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Thank you so much Tharun! 😊😊😊
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It’s OK to be scared. . .
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I know. And it takes courage to admit you’re scared 😟
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You’re scared and courageous at the same time B)
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Yes. You’re really good at this Jay! 😊💛
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at? describing you? 🙂
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Yes. Most definitely. Seems like you know what’s inside my soul. Hahahahaha
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hahah oh no… your soul is on display in your poetry B)
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You think so? You’re too kind! Thank you Jay 💛💛💛
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If I can see your soul… that will be scary B)
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LOL! 😅😅😅
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Trust is needed, in love. It is needed to hold character in place, through understanding, through purpose. If a person has found someone to love, then they should never take it lightly. It is because the other might be the one who truly has a place in the relationship. If that is the case, then they will feel betrayed, once they find out that the other is not taking the love with as much seriousness as they do. They’ll begin to doubt, being to wonder, begin to get confused.
I once heard the words, “There’s always only one broken soul, in a ruined relationship.” I forget where I heard that from, though I think it was from a book. I think it means that one side has moved on, while the other side is still holding on.
Love is the mountain meant to be made out of the molehill, because it must be taken with that much seriousness. Though, of course… not enough to overthink. 🙂
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You always say the most wonderful words! You left me awestruck as usual. Thank you so much! More power to you 💛💛💛
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Oh Kat, this is heart-wrenching. Beautifully expressed
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Thank you so much dear Shweta! 💛💛💛
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Wowwww😇
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💛💛💛
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Wow…..beautifully expressed dear.
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Thank you so much Navin! 💛💛💛
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You’re welcome dear.
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Sure Navin! 😉
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Thank you very much! 😊
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Aww. Thank you for the nomination Navin! I don’t think I deserve it, but thanks really. My heart is giddy at the moment 😊😍
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You’re welcome dear. You deserve it very much….you just don’t know your “worth”
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I can’t thank you enough 😊
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❤️
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